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In the past several days, I was in Southern California biking under the bright sunshine.
Sometimes I went through a crowd and enjoyed just looking at many kinds of American foods. 

After a while I tried surfing in the sunset. I've never experienced it before,
but I had a good time doing it. However, I set a PR of getting the worst sunburn in my life.

On the way to hotel, I visited the San Diego zoo, and eventually I arrived at the border, which was my goal.
When I saw it, I realized that I could accomplish my biking goal. I was really moved by that,
and went drinking with my members. I'll never forget this wonderful experience.


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We reached the Huntington Beach and we decided to surf here. I couldn't surf at all because this was the first time for me to surf. But one of the members could surf well, so I learned from him. Finally, I could surf completely! It was such a nice experience. I wanted to practice more after this trip.

Then, we arrived at the San Diego Zoo. I LOVED THE PANDA VERY MUCH! YEAH!! He was lovely and his gestures were so hilarious. I bought a key chain of panda. I decided to keep this my whole life.

We took a rest here and ate a lunch. But the beef steaks which I ate tasted too bad! Too salty...:( I couldn't eat any more. I was not satisfied with lunch but anyway we left here for the destination of our trip.

Eventually, we arrived at the destination of our trip, the Border Field State Park. This was the toughest and the hardest trip I have ever made. But also this was the most interesting and the most exciting trip! I can never forget this experience. I want to say thank you to all of the members and thank all of the people who see this blogs.

Murphy

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    we started cycling in Santa Barbra. The beach is beautiful, but there are a lot of tourists so we can't go fast. However we stopped to do some surfing / I don't know how to surf :) but, it does't matter. After that we went to San Diego. the weather was nice, but I had a terrible sunburn :( which is never happened tome before. I was very happy and exited in San Diego zoo / OMG WHAT A MASSIVE PANDA. I brought some souvenirs to my family and friends / I think they would like it. Then we left the zoo and we start moving on the coast / and my sunburn was bothering me / and then at the end we arrived to the border / I was very happy when we arrived / I felt like  YES !!!WE MADE IT. We did a very great job in this trip / I wish we could do it again one day without getting a terrible sunburn 

:).I would like to say Thanks for my friends and my family and all the supporters.   

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Vancouver was the start of our trip. Everything was okay because we were on time, and it was beautiful. Suddenly, I met my old friend Joe from high school. He has been living in Seattle, and he was very 

.happy to see me! I wish I could take him with us in the trip, but he's gotta go to work tomorrow.

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Today we are riding our bikes on the Californian coast, and we saw a very beautiful view. However I feel a little pain in my muscle, but I will keep moving not matter what. Maybe this is just because we are still in the beginning. The road is going up and I still feel the pain in my muscle. I think this is a muscle sore :(. I feel the pain but the beautiful coast alleviated that for me.      

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Bostonian Post#3

For a couple of days, we were biking along a coast seeing great landscape of Pacific Ocean.
I had a little leg ache, but the scenery helped me to forget it.

Afterward, we went through the Redwood Forest. At that time I found several orchard trees.
I was so starving that I asked the other members to stop riding bikes in order to eat some of them.
Although I didn't remember how many pieces of fruit I ate, I was perfectly delighted.

We also across the Golden Gate Bridge. This was the first time for me to see this bridge.
It was really awesome! If I were a bird, I would fly above it and would like to take pictures
from the sky. But in fact, we took several pictures together on the ground, and went to the next destination.

Bostonian

Murphy Post #3

A couple of hours after entering California, we stopped at the Redwood Forest which was on the UNESCO World Heritage List. There were many thick and tall trees so I was speechless because of the power which the trees have. Also I was healed by the power of nature. If I am tired in my daily life, I will return here to get the power of nature.

Then, we reached the San Francisco. At that time, I felt my butt hurt a lot. The more I pedaled, the more I felt pain. So we went to the fruit orchards to take a rest and get vitamins from the fruit. After I had some oranges, I felt the improvement of my condition! The power of fruit was tremendously awesome! I said thank you for the blessings of nature, we left for the next place.

We crossed the bridge called "the Golden Gate Bridge". When I saw the view of the bridge, I said 'amazing! magnificent!!' But I couldn't see under the bridge because it was too terrible height to see. I almost wet my pants! I heard later that the bridge was a famous suicide place...:( It felt creepy... Then, we crossed that big bridge and continued on our great trip!

Murphy