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    we started cycling in Santa Barbra. The beach is beautiful, but there are a lot of tourists so we can't go fast. However we stopped to do some surfing / I don't know how to surf :) but, it does't matter. After that we went to San Diego. the weather was nice, but I had a terrible sunburn :( which is never happened tome before. I was very happy and exited in San Diego zoo / OMG WHAT A MASSIVE PANDA. I brought some souvenirs to my family and friends / I think they would like it. Then we left the zoo and we start moving on the coast / and my sunburn was bothering me / and then at the end we arrived to the border / I was very happy when we arrived / I felt like  YES !!!WE MADE IT. We did a very great job in this trip / I wish we could do it again one day without getting a terrible sunburn 

:).I would like to say Thanks for my friends and my family and all the supporters.   

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